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28- Honor her by *Bahama-dreams:iconBahama-dreams:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Haiku & Eastern


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   Love has not been kind
a body bruised and beaten
       her will cannot be
©2009 *Bahama-dreams
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Feb 28

For Haikuwrimo 2009 write a haiku a day for the month of February.

Check out :iconmsjames: for details

For my last Haiku I honor the most amazing writer I've come across here. =innocencedied2nite I only hope to capture a mere pittance of how amazing this woman is.


I love you Ali

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*RedDragonfly Feb 28, 2009, 10:22:46 AM
Congratulations on making it through the whole month!

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Things need not have happened to be true. Tales and dreams are the shadow-truths that will endure when mere facts are dust and ashes, and forgot.
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*Bahama-dreams Feb 28, 2009, 10:25:29 AM
Thanks very much... do many?

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*RedDragonfly Feb 28, 2009, 10:30:31 AM
Looks like about a third of the writers who joined up managed to finish- assuming those who made it to the last day will finish up today!
I'm still reading yours and might have more comments later, but tomorrow I'll have a journal feature with everyone who finished the wrimo!

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Things need not have happened to be true. Tales and dreams are the shadow-truths that will endure when mere facts are dust and ashes, and forgot.
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~xDisasterx3 Feb 28, 2009, 11:33:20 AM
You capture her beautifully :)

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Mistakes are a crude synonym for experience, & you can put a band aid on a cut, but that wont heal the scar.
//.error:\\\#43567: Don't fit among the pretty things...
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*Bahama-dreams Mar 1, 2009, 2:00:20 AM
Thank You, she's a beautiful person

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*Bahama-dreams Mar 1, 2009, 2:08:51 AM
I look forward to any comments or crit you may have.

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`innocencedied2nite Mar 3, 2009, 6:22:52 PM
Omg..:cries: I don't know what to say....
Except thank you, which seems rather weak. I am touched so deeply. :heart:

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"Your ignorance is irrelevant. However, your blatant irresponsible display is something I cannot ignore. Nor will I condone it. Realize your place and accept your fate." - Timeless Calls
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*Bahama-dreams Mar 3, 2009, 9:13:43 PM
I'm glad you liked it. I was really trying to capture you in those few syllables. Thanks

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`innocencedied2nite Mar 5, 2009, 1:09:23 PM
I think you caught how I feel very well. And you're welcome. Truly.

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"Your ignorance is irrelevant. However, your blatant irresponsible display is something I cannot ignore. Nor will I condone it. Realize your place and accept your fate." - Timeless Calls
:frail:
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