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I watched her sleep in my minds eye tonight
and wrote this in about 20 minutes.

This may be one of the most powerful pieces
I've ever written. Please crit honestly cause
I can't improve otherwise.

I've submitted it to :iconcornpoplabs: contest, love.
Go check them out!


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Marco
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"
Your shoulders which bear the burden
of a relationship supposedly doomed
from the start, yet we will last until,
more than likely, you bury me
long before your own time comes."
So true. Especially because of something a psychic said. This connected so hard.
This piece is absolutely wonderful.