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The Ending is Unwritten by *Bahama-dreams:iconBahama-dreams:



My love, my life, the one I call friend.  
You can always count on me until the end.  
I shall stay solid, foundation runs deep,
with me always, you I'll keep. 
 
Locked in my heart few are allowed to go,
the journey inside is horribly slow.  
With quickened pace you entered within,
as if always there from where I begin. 
 
We two have existed from times emergence,
when I arrive at my next life I'll await the convergence,
the meeting of two souls who've traveled before.  
Together we've lain on a distant shore. 
 
This life or the next, you I shall meet again,
not a question of where, but the question is when.  
Each life we live will intertwine,
our souls age with grace with the passage of time. 
 
Our next lives, our past lives,
were you my lover?  
Maybe my wife, my sister,
my brother,
maybe my father or
even my mother,
it matters not one or the other.
 
I only know until this life will end,
I'll be happy to call you my friend.
No one writes words that make you feel this way,
you're on my mind throughout the day.

In this life you are my friend,
Who knows what our future will hold.
Our story has neither beginning nor end.  
our whole story is yet to be told.

It's Unwritten
©2007-2009 *Bahama-dreams
:iconbahama-dreams:

Author's Comments

How many lives do we have?
This is based in the belief that we have many soumates during our life but, they may not be who you expect. When you meet one though, you know it because something unknown just draws you to that person.

Who knows?

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:iconwingsoftears:
This is beautiful ... the person you write for here hun should feel honoured.

:hug:

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:iconbahama-dreams:
I've had three 'great' loves in my life and she's one of them. I had put some of the stuff I wrote for her in scraps after we figured out we just weren't gonna work out. She remains my most precious friend, I've never talked about her with you but, yeah she's something else. She literally changed my life and is why I'm here on D. A. *sigh* (happy)

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:iconwingsoftears:
As I said hun she would have to be honoured for this ... it truely is beautiful

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"Be kinder than necessary because everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle.”
:iconaleatha-q:
The rhyming is so awesome and well, the message is beautiful :)
:iconbahama-dreams:
:) XXX

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:iconbahama-dreams:
Thanks hon :)

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:iconchananamuffin:
sorry i've been off for so long love...

this embodies a bit of my own strains of thought of recent.

love it.

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there's a mindless self indulgence lyric for any occasion...
:iconbahama-dreams:
Don't be sorry baby! You're here when you're here ya know?
I'm glad you like this piece. I myself haven't uploaded anything lately, I guess I just haven't had anything to say. See you Saturday?

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